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A lost cause that never finds;
troubled dreams and faded lines.
Forever drowning and cursed to be,
losing touch and touch to see.
Tortured mind and hungered soul;
loss of love; burnt out coal.
Tears of acid running dry,
reality fading as I cry.
Hollow screams echo here;
smell of never-ending fear.
Smile of chaos; burning blood;
lies of misery; feel of mud.
False hope and blinding pain;
courage hiding and bravery drained.
Sighs of passion thirsting for life;
blurry visions, an unending strife.
Imprisoned happiness locked up tight;
lost the key, end of sight.
Whispering voices; a trembling sound;
fading faces that cannot be found.
Decieving friends, family of solitude;
fake smiles and false gratitude.
Lingering worry and deafeaning silence;
forgotten hurt; scars of violence.
Thoughts of madness, feelings of war;
captured imagination becoming sore.
Moving images, captivating danger;
alluring time; reflecting a stranger.
Cruel sincerity, a broken sign;
blaming judgement, wisdom of mine.
Sightless scars; devastating disasters;
unconcious loyalty; confiding masters.
Ignored death, unheard scream;
finite forever, listless dream.
Apathetic wishes, selfish lies;
A selfless prayer with no reply.
©2008-2009 ~BlackOctober16
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Staying up at night, is what I do best. Thoughts move me to the point where sleep is not an option.
And last night, this is what I wrote :)
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wow... now thats what i call a way with words! i know how you feel, i don't sleep much either and end up writing. nothing this good though. i'm convinced you are angelina!hehe

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'we were in bed, we had knives, shit happens'- angelina jolie in her wilder years!lol i love that woman!

'i wana lawyer, i wana doctor, I WANT A CHEESE SANDWHICH!' lol ahh harely!
I don't do well staying up at night, but sometimes I have no choice.
I wish I had your talent with words, it would give me hope.

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"Without our imaginations, we'd be
like all those other poor dullards."
-- Anthony Hopkins, "Red Dragon" (2002)
that is well written. i liked this line particularly:

"Tortured mind and hungered soul;
loss of love; burnt out coal."

and your comment about your thoughts moving you to not sleep and write makes me curious about what kind of thoughts go on in your mind. have you ever read Wasted by Marya Hornbacher? or her newest book Madness?
aw thank you
yes i dont get much sleep, i am a night person ;)
no i havent read those, i will check them out:)
i read alot of stephen king

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“The tongue like a sharp knife... Kills without drawing blood.”
i used to be a night person, but now i work early in the morning so i have to go to bed early. :[


what kind of thoughts do you normally have that keep you awake, if you dont mind me asking?
Uhmm just life, you like why are we here, whats the purpose of everything.
just crazy stuff lol

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“The tongue like a sharp knife... Kills without drawing blood.”
thats not crazy at all. thats the same kind of stuff that i like to think about and talk to others about. you seem like a really cool person, on top of being incredibly beautiful, its not often you find that.

:)
aw well thank you ;)
I've always been different from everyone else, but then I realized I'm better off that way. Alot of people are superficial and fake, and thats just not me:)

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“The tongue like a sharp knife... Kills without drawing blood.”

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